User talk:Vesna/Fighters Guild Chronicles

When they are drinking you have said that life had became more 'monogomous', i'm guessing you meant to say 'monotonous'. Just a suggestion, apart from that it's very good stuff. — Unsigned comment by 81.132.18.251 (talk)

Ah, my bad. Thanks. Vesna 21:16, 5 June 2008 (EDT)

I liked it very much. Kudos. Darkle 23:01, 3 October 2008 (EDT)

Ditto Darkle. I think it should be added onto. Ninja Hinder 22:23, 4 October 2008 (EDT)

I just read chapter 1-4. Can't wait for the next chapter (because of the ending, "She saw something completely unexpected") :) ~Blue deep

Very cool. I really look forward to reading the next chapter(s). The ending "She saw something completely unexpected" is a perfect cliffhanger! Awesome. Auri-El Reborn