User talk:Dwarfmp/Sandbox5

Hi Dwarfmp! I came across your sandbox for Avulstein Gray-Mane and noticed that you haven't worked on it in a while. The template on the primary NPC page instructs a user to remove it should there be no activity for some time (in this case, since Oct. 2012). With that said, your sandbox greatly improves on the article as it is. Would you consider simply using the content you have created so far? While incomplete, it will still serve the wiki much better than the current page does. :) Thanks! GodRaine^Talk 07:14, 10 March 2013 (GMT)

Yes I know, I was kind of "stuck" with the fact Avulstein has different dialogue based on how you progress the quest (talk to his mother, or go straight to him). And yes, I'm a very very lazy person, I didn't have the heart to go through all of it just for that, not at the time anyway. I'll ask around and see if someone is willing to do some "testing" so we can get the show on the road, there's not much more to add to the article ~ Dwarfmp (talk) 13:13, 10 March 2013 (GMT)

Edit: I think the main problem was how to present the dialogue, not the dialogue itself, now that I take another look at it ~ Dwarfmp (talk) 13:15, 10 March 2013 (GMT)

Dialogue check

All the dialogue from the initial, direct conversation with Avulstein checks out. To be really anal about it, when he's supposed to say, "I am not going to let that happen!", the voice actor instead said, "I am not gonna let that happen!" At least, that's what I heard.

I haven't corroborated the Fralia version. Also, you might wanna slap a sic tag on the "too" in "I'd go and search their house for proof, but they want me too." Let me know if you want me take it any further. Minor Edits^{Threats•Evidence} 19:50, 17 March 2013 (GMT)