User talk:M.trix/The Listener's Saga: The Sundered Brotherhood

Feel free to comment on my story and give feedback — Unsigned comment by M.trix (talk • contribs)

I started reading but I'm afraid the spelling put me off! I think you're going to have to fix that before you get much feedback. –Rpeh^{•T•C•E•} 02:14, 2 May 2008 (EDT)

Good work

very nice you should make some more but mind your spelling